Monday, October 21, 2013

Dawn




dusk
either beginning or end
first stirring of life
or the last image
chanced upon by
aged unseeing eyes

an image
of dawn or dusk
of beginning or end
not seen but felt
before the last breath
from scattered pieces
of mind

last breath
in wondrous glow
of dawn or dusk

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Anonymous wrote:

It's one of your saddest compositions. It embodies and contains sadness, emptiness, absence where traces of presence linger in the tenuous glow. Also almost liberating... as if the need to continue has been abdicated without struggle. In a tacit pact the glow of dawn and dusk have agreed to fill the vacuum.

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