The image is dark, brooding and powerful and your words seem to have emanated from its depths.In response i offer some words too:If it is silence it screams in protestIf it is a shadow it camouflages substanceIt is space it contains a vast emptinessIf it is a continuum fragments pull it asunderIf it is the truth it is assaulted by contestationsIt is reality it is beset with contradictions It is inevitable it is inescapable.
Corrections:The image is dark, brooding and powerful and your words seem to have emanated from its depths.In response i offer some words too:If it is silence it screams in protestIf it is a shadow it camouflages substanceIf it is space it contains a vast emptinessIf it is a continuum fragments pull it asunderIf it is the truth it is assaulted by contestationsIf it is reality it is beset with contradictions It is inevitable it is inescapable
To the Anonymous: Is another correction required?
i could have written If it is inevitable it is inescapable but decided against it, at the risk of asymmetry.So no further correction required but an attestation will be most welcome.Thank you.
simple words, deep meaning. Sir but never say ur days r numbered. th world needs to learn a lot from ur intellect
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The image is dark, brooding and powerful and your words seem to have emanated from its depths.
In response i offer some words too:
If it is silence it screams in protest
If it is a shadow it camouflages substance
It is space it contains a vast emptiness
If it is a continuum fragments pull it asunder
If it is the truth it is assaulted by contestations
It is reality it is beset with contradictions
It is inevitable it is inescapable.
Corrections:
The image is dark, brooding and powerful and your words seem to have emanated from its depths.
In response i offer some words too:
If it is silence it screams in protest
If it is a shadow it camouflages substance
If it is space it contains a vast emptiness
If it is a continuum fragments pull it asunder
If it is the truth it is assaulted by contestations
If it is reality it is beset with contradictions
It is inevitable it is inescapable
To the Anonymous: Is another correction required?
i could have written
If it is inevitable it is inescapable but decided against it, at the risk of asymmetry.
So no further correction required but an attestation will be most welcome.
Thank you.
simple words, deep meaning. Sir but never say ur days r numbered. th world needs to learn a lot from ur intellect
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